OP1: My deepest fear and greatest hope.

My deepest fear, I didn't think about this subject. However I believe everyone has fear in soneone. Even president or combative sports player. I heard about that the man who has many thing fears to lose something.

First, in my case, I fear to meet new people. It means actually I don't like to meet someone new. I don't know it's fear or something however when I meet someone new I don't know what to talk. Like that situation I become a deaf. Real problem is, but that's not the end. I start to worry about that that how they're think about me. Maybe ther'll think I'm angry. When I become intimate I can speak and talk so much. How can I overcome this?

Second, my greatest hope, I don't know it's magnificent dream. I hope everyone aroud me become rich and healthy. My family, my close friend...Saying like this I don't want you to misunderstand. I'm not kind person. I just want to hear they saying misery and when I'm led into something bed, they can help me. Lastly, I hope me that I never regret someing. After a while, I really don't want to regret about what I've done or I shoud not have done.

Don't be afraid of meeting people!~
They are not so stranger as much as you think!
If you can receive their simple kindness or smile toward them, you would be a wonderful friend of theirs.

Actually...That's very easy way to make friends.. it isn't easy for me too..
Let's make some efforts together and overcome our problems!~

You are caring for people around you once you get to know them.

To start a relationship....
I agree smile is really a good way of showing your mind.
I am also reserved and reluctant to speak to someone first.
When you smile they'll come to you first.

You must be the Jun, having been sitting in front of me~
During the group work, I was actually concerned about how you feel about me.
Everybody seems to get a bit stressed from a new relationship. It's not just your problem.

Since I've got some information on what kind of person you are, from now on,
I'm not going to misunderstand you and will be more relaxed in other group works.

By the way, I liked the way you get into the conversation without hesitation.

see you~

Hi Jun-woo,

Thanks very much for your journal entry. Fear of meeting new people can be both a fear and a source of excitement at the same time, I think. However, I get the impression that when you do make friends, you are a very loyal and strong companion. I found your "hope" a little hard to follow, because it makes you sound less kind than I think you actually are.

Your writing shows great organization, dealing with the two main issues and leading in to them with a simple but thought-provoking introduction.


Below are some suggestions for language development:

Cho Jun-woo wrote: My deepest fear, I didn't think about this subject. However I believe everyone has fear in soneone. Even president or combative sports player. I heard about that the man who has many thing fears to lose something.

First, in my case, I fear to meet new people. It means actually I don't like to meet someone new. I don't know it's fear or something however when I meet someone new I don't know what to talk. Like that situation I become a deaf. Real problem is, but that's not the end. I start to worry about that that how they're think about me. Maybe ther'll think I'm angry. When I become intimate I can speak and talk so much. How can I overcome this?

Second, my greatest hope, I don't know it's magnificent dream. I hope everyone aroud me become rich and healthy. My family, my close friend...Saying like this I don't want you to misunderstand. I'm not kind person. I just want to hear they saying misery and when I'm led into something bed, they can help me. Lastly, I hope me that I never regret someing. After a while, I really don't want to regret about what I've done or I shoud not have done.

My deepest fear... I haven't thought much about this subject before

I don't know if it's fear or something else, but when I meet someone new I don't know what to talk about

Second, there is my greatest hope. I'm not sure, but it's like a magnificent dream


I hope those suggestions help you and good luck with your next journal entry.

Best of luck,

~ Jason


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I am familiar with your name, but I'm sorrry I can't match it with your face. You are like another myself as for your own fear. Why don't you give me an advise when you find a way to overcome your fear?

I almost gave up on my miserable character and accept to live with it. What is different from the past is that I don't blame myself anymore....