OP1: Being lazy and a parent

As a 4th year student preparing for the teacher's exam as well, I sometimes feel despaired and can't get out of the endless laziness.
Actually, I love being lazy.
To overcome this habitual laziness, I reward myself by telling myself that if I just do this work, I get to be lazy.
You can take advantage of your laziness as a reward to motivate you to do more exciting things.

I also had to fight back the temptation to be lazy during winter vacation. Well, good old days are gone, and it's time to tackle our works. Cheer up and I hope you could you acheive whatever you want at the end of this year!

Namsook,

Sometimes, we need temporary lasiness to refresh ourselves.
Don't you think?

As I have experienced you, you are not that lasy but discreet.

I also like what you said that you want to be a good friend of your daughter.

Love,

Young

I totally agree with what you said above.
Yes, that's why we should keeping looking on bright side of our life.

Happy reading your article!
Laziness is something that everybody has in variety way.
Once you give out a try, it would not be a problem. Don't worry.
I totally feel the same about parents and future family of ours.
we should never forget what we had from our parents.
I think you will be a lovely dedicated mother.
Also, you will be super duper teacher if you think the students of yours
as your children.

Being lazy is very serious problem, but I can't still solve it.
We have to try to solve it together!

Let's plan our day by day.

Endless endeavor towards life is also my lifetime goal.
But the problem is I'm too easily exhausted over things upon my shoulder.

Your long essay shows that you're really hard working person, and nobody will doubt about it.
As long as you're in a good shape, I don't think you should worry about being lazy.
you seem naturally born, dilligent person.

I envy you

Hi Namsook,

I can certainly relate well to both your fears and hopes! I find it very hard to forgive myself when I have been even slightly lazy, and all my grandest hopes are wrapped up in my family

This is quite a good piece of writing. You've certainly organized it well and explored the issues in a very articulate way, with some very good written expression that gets across your feelings and points. Well done!

Below are some of my language development recommendations:

Jung namsook wrote:

With only less than a year left, it’s time to play some hardball for Teacher's Exam. This year I will be taking the test. I am so honored to apply for a big race even though it’s getting far more competitive as it goes by. Preparing for a competition, I found my deepest fear to heave out again. Being lazy; it’s the one that used to appear for a long time. Along with a chronic habitual idleness, I would like to share my greatest hope with you.

To begin with, frankly speaking, I’d been as idle as I would spend the whole time watching TV dramas during the winter vacation. Let alone defer what should be done, I neglected my required classes. I believe that habitual slow is the axis of evil in life. That’s why I’m so afraid of being so lazy. Besides it bears other wrong habits such as, I easily abandon what I’m supposed to do as well as avoid doing trials and errors. Consequently, incurable habits will discourage me to go for my dream. Now I want to treat this fear myself. I cannot let my life flow with neglect. I would try to do my best even if I fail to completely fulfill my responsibility. Plus, I shall perform my duty free from fear of negligence.

When it comes to the most important hope, I can say that my family comes first all the time. I am striving to be committed to my beloved. Without their greatest love, I will be no longer motivated no matter what I am made out. My plan A is to be a commendable parent, which is not a tentative project but a longstanding strategy. I would be a cultured mother who shores up my family at any time. It’ll be the same as building up my character. In particular, my focus on life is to be a respectful mom willing to be a friend. I’m not going to compel my adorable daughter to live for parents. I truly point out that there exist only good parents that will be able to boost their children to accomplish their wishes. In the end, the children should be highly intelligent or artistic, or who have a high level of skill, especially in one area. We just call them the gifted.

When I first noted the composition assignment, I thought English composition should be one of the deepest fears. On the other hand, that’s what I really hope not only to write authentic English sentence but raise the power of writing for thinking. Overall, fear and hope come together likewise our life goes wrong and right.

it’s the one thing that has reappeared constantly over a long period of time

Besides, it leads to other wrong habits such as easily abandoning what I’m supposed to be doing as well as avoiding facing trials and errors.

I will no longer be motivated no matter what I am made out of [OR what I make out to do]


I hope those suggestions help and well done on a great journal entry.

Best regards,

~ Jason


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Your name is very familiar to me, and I thought of you! We took the same class, last semester.

When I was middle school student, the English teacher whe made me who I am, was ROOKY TEACHER. She was also mother of two daughter. The reason I say this story to you is that I hope you could pass this year's exam. Maybe you would be difficult to study as a mother, wife, and a student. However if you are able to invest your time and passion for your career, then you can get it, finally.

Actually, I say very simply but it is the most diffidult thing to devote myself to study, I think. Because there are so much things which attract me out of studying ; like internet, soap opera, friends and so on. The final world is only for the person who endures their hard time.

I just write about how to overcome the difficult period of preparing a certain EXAM, as a student in the same situation. Good luck with you!~

Don't be slackers... hahahaha..
sometimes, burdens that you have to are really helpful for what you do. I don't know eaxatly who and how are you but based on my experiences you can get it over in your family love!
I am going to pray for you.
good luck to your things


Lovely,


Kanghoon

nice to see you again on class!

I was touched a lot by your well- organized and written writing.There are many things I have to learn, I think.

Being lazy is also incurable habbit for me. As it have made anxious and depressed more and more , I started to love my habit itself and use this habit as means to boost my potential.